Round 2 is excellent so far! I love all the character development and your narrative techniques are exceptional. Aaah, so much suspense. D: Wonderful work!
*shivers* This one's unique amongst your OCT entries, wow... I don't see your characters in flight and torment as often as they're on some raucous buttkicking hootenanny deal. It's poignant, and in its way it's beautiful.
can´t wait to read more n_n
This one's unique amongst your OCT entries, wow... I don't see your characters in flight and torment as often as they're on some raucous buttkicking hootenanny deal. It's poignant, and in its way it's beautiful.