I know it's a pain, but RUN, Sloth!!
I think that his reason for his job is sort of sweet, but pushed to a level where he becomes a horrible and dangerous threat. I see where he's coming from, though I wouldn't agree with him for an instant.
Brilliant artwork aside, you've got a damn fine script here.
OMG this is so awesome >:3
I'm starting to gain a new understanding of why I've admired you for these past 4, 5 years.
That looks painful. D:
excellent work, really
Very nice flow. I wish some "pros" would take notes from you, both in style and "rhythm".
The narration mixed with the events happening at the moment really give insight to the character, can't stop reading!
I LOVE the character designs.
ooh! I'm lovin it! I can't wait to see more! This is going to be AMAZING!