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VoI: Round 2-14 by Endling VoI: Round 2-14 by Endling
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WaywardVentus Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
The look of surprise at the end is simply bone chilling, excellent work on facial expressions like always. I love your work.
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yazukiwolf Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011
awesome story. Can`t wait to see more
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War-And-Pieces Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
oh SNAP!... shit son he just got played!
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artkid23 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011
wow, if that's not ironic i don't know what is. that dude that he was actually killing immortals, but in the end learns that they don't actually die. how sad.... i feel kinda sympathetic for the guy... kinda
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ekf501 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
oh snap lol didn't think he'd hear that for is dying words
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Ennyledam Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011
I love how the guy's like "OH CRAP" in the last panel. xD
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Chowii Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
BELPHEGOOOOOOR NOOOOOOO
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hajime-kun Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
he'll die to protect his Lady, but not really "die". Just sacrifice himself just for a "time".
c'est vraiment entrainant! luv it!
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BaBaltis Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
Belphegor is the coolest eye ever. I feel like that needs saying.
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DTJB Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really cryptic, nice.
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EleosArgentum Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
Really painful, must be... to discover all your efforts worth nothing. that all your sacrifices have been a waste.
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HojoMcOjo Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
By the Gods, you story telling abilities are amazing. This is just...It's thrilling, it's intriguing, it's just astounding! Please keep this up, this is inspirational. Bravo man.
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shawnadh Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Hobbyist
ngl when I looked and saw that you dropped out, I was really bummed. I really wanted to see how Sloth handled Belphegor dying. '___ '

Amazing job with this whole comic. The art and the storytelling were both perfect. It also makes me want to see more of the Living with Sin cast (especially Bel if this isn't canon hee)
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MuseWhimsy Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What a loyal servant. :(
Your use of the eye through the round has been wonderful. I've really enjoyed/admired the changes in expressions and movement.
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Leimyu Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
I am a bit confused by the text in the second-to and last panel.
He kind of seems to state the same thing twice; he will die... the old man will 'simply' die.

I understand that his explanation stated that he is in a shared body, but this doesn't take away the fact that he himself also 'simply' dies. I see no difference in his death, compared to the death of the old man, thus kind of ruining the impact that the last panel is supposed to have (at least I think you tried to make it have one). Perhaps if he'd had said:
"...we are two entities. and I will die here, while she lives one. You.. you will simply die."
He would've at least described two different scenario's, but this wouldn't solve the problem. Just hide it somewhat.. since the question I ask you remains: what makes his death superior?

/endrant
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FuyusFox Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
If you don't mind me cutting in, I believe that this is referring to earlier in the comic when it was stated that demons don't 'die', they simply lose themselves for awhile. This leading to the conclusion that even if Belphegor 'dies' he will simply return someday in another form, but that the Smoker will simply 'die', meaning that he won't come back, that it's all over for him and this is the end.

At least, this is what I got.
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Leimyu Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
Of course I don't mind :D
And I certainly understand where you're coming from with this statement. But I find that the earlier explanation kind of lost it's dramatic power and does not make the final sentence go POW - yes my critique is purely based on the theatrical value of the writing -
Probably because in the second-last panel he goes back to saying the word 'die', even though he already explained that he doesn't actually do that. The usage of this word kind of puts him back on the old man's level, even though my sub-conscience desires there to be a explicit difference between their situations -> in the last two panels specifically. I simply feel he should've concluded his earlier explanation in a better way. "I will die AND return. You will simply die."
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FuyusFox Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess I can see where you're coming from on that, and you do raise a valid point.
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I-F Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
I wonder how Sloth will react when she finds out Belphegor died.
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CandyAppleRainbows Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
Own.
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Sketching-Panda-Ren Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D: Well that's a slap in the face. I feel bad for Belphegor.
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meifire Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
But eyes make everything better. >:T
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Voracious-Wolf Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Your twist is awesome <3
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CsNsAi Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
Well, that sucks :T
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MarikBentusi Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
Fuck, how the hell did you manage to make me feel sorry for that eye-thingy!? FUCK. That second-to-last panel is friggin sad and the last one is perfectly capturing the moment where a heart skips a beat.

:<
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jiko29 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Saaaad
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Tsukinekoi Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Take that, you old ass!
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BlueMew210210 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
its kind of sad really..... the fact that they have o kill each other.... hm....... im hoping that the guy wont die but....... yeah he's gonna die
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Haikiz Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
... W-why does Mr. Eye have to die D:

/crawls into a corner
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