Strong suggestion: Close her mouth in p2, because it looks like she's talking. At first read I thought that the girl in p2 was someone else responding to the character in p1, which led to some confusion when the guys behind her got all chopped up. I had to think for a bit and re-read before I was sure of what was happening.
You want your readers to read twice, but not because they're confused...
Oh my.....it appears as if i will be awaiting each installment of this with baited breath....its just so incredible.....*___*
I dont honestly know where to start. You seem to consider each part so well. The angles chosen are just so great!! like the subtle upshot in the first panel and the last panel looking down showing all he carnage as well as the expressions of the...egg shaped character.
The expressions are great on all the faces. theres just so much movement....
Do you have any plans on publishing this? i'd certainly buy it!
When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.
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You want your readers to read twice, but not because they're confused...
Love the expression of humpty's face
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Everything happens for a reason, even if said reason is highly illogical
you got a real good cliffhanger here, I can't wait till the next page ^^
Very much like how you handled the radio conversation also - groovy groovy!
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I dont honestly know where to start. You seem to consider each part so well. The angles chosen are just so great!! like the subtle upshot in the first panel and the last panel looking down showing all he carnage as well as the expressions of the...egg shaped character.
The expressions are great on all the faces. theres just so much movement....
Do you have any plans on publishing this? i'd certainly buy it!
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How much poo can a puchu chew if a puchu could chew poo!!!
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